This is another 1st for me(i am hving a lot of 1st's now,maybe because im trying different things),its a story(not mine)a fictional one which i had written in 1 hour for a college event.
Another thing i wanted to add was that the problem with having written something like my earlier article it becomes difficult to get you to not compare my other articles with it...basically what i want to say is,this story ive written sucks,but its the best i could do for my 1st, so please bear with it and dont stop readin my blog.I will try postin somethin better(hopefully)soon.
Its a Tale merger of sleeping beauty and jack and the beanstalk to say, but i havent borrowed much.(also their writers and me, are not chetan bhagat and raju hirani respectively,so no controversy here)
Title - Then, now and when?
Part 1 - Year 1933 to 1949
Way back in the mid 20th century there was King Francesc Fabregas who lived with his wife Maria Sharapova, who became Maria Fabregas after marriage. Maria had belonged to a family of warriors and was won over by a Fellow warrior (francesc).
They were a weird combination with he being 5 ft 6 and she …was 6 ft tall!! But love doesn’t look at height, weight and so they were very happy in each other’s company.
The sad part though was that Maria could not bear a child and they wanted one with all their heart, for there family to go on for many more years to come.
Suddenly one day, while Maria had gone for a swim in the pond, a frog came out of no where and granted her one and only wish, that of a child (he read her mind).
Soon they had a beautiful girl and they named her Shruti, reason being, they were in love with India and so they always wanted an Indian name for their child (derived from Shruti Hassan)
During Shruti’s christening ceremony, when everything was going joyful for the couple, an evil fairy (or witch) cursed them that their child would die when she would turn 15 or 16 years of age. This terrified the Fabregas’s and they immediately took help from a good fairy to remove the curse.
The curse was irreversible, but there was another option they had, i.e., to go to sleep for a 100 years and wait for a “true love’s first kiss” for the young princess, so that the witch’s curse would not have any effect.
Soon, what was most feared had happened and in 1949 the curse of the evil witch came true and everybody in the castle was put to sleep…
Part 2-Year 2009
Jack was a son of a poor mother. They had a very disturbing life. They did not have any food to eat as the recession in the market had caused a tremendous price rise and reduced their purchasing power.
Money soon ran out and their only asset left was a cow. Mother told jack “son, go to the market and sell the cow at the best possible price, so that we get enough money to buy food till the markets are stable again and we get our jobs back”.
The son obeyed and walked towards lokhandwala market to sell his cow. While going there I met him… I offered him 7 magical beans for his cow. He rejected my offer straight away saying it was too less. He carried on to the marker and reached there faster than the cars thanks to the killing traffic and the shoddy roads.
Once he reached his destination he tried real hard to sell his cow at McDonald’s but they did not want a cow, they said they use only pork in making their burgers. He tried not getting distracted by the chic’s shopping and just do what he was suppose to(sell his cow). But even after trying so hard ,at the end of the day he was going home with what he had come with.
I met him again on his way back and said “Dude, take these magical beans, they’ll work, I’m telling you, just gimme your cow, it’s faster than the cars and gives super mileage also. And anyways I don’t have place to plant these beans”. He though for a moment and then agreed to the offer as if he had no choice, but it was a good deal you see. I introduced myself after the sale “I am Shivam and you are?”he was already gone by then.
Jack reached home and as expected his mom was furious at her son. She wished that if only her son was as street smart as the person who sold him the beans. She threw out the beans that instant.
The next morning the beans had grown into a tree with its height surpassing the sky. Both mother and son were amazed. Jack decided to climb up the tree. He reached the sky and then …the black hole had sucked him in and he went round and round …and round …
Part 3- Year 2049(not love story 2050 please)
Part 3- Year 2049(not love story 2050 please)
Jack heard some screaming, he thought it was a dream, then suddenly he got up .H realized he had a reached some place new. Everything was HUGE. He heard the screaming again, it was a giant... It was “Khali”. Jack hid behind a table but khali saw him, so jack ran out of the house and into the world, a new world .Where cars were going to water (not necessary that they always fly around in the future).A new under water city had been built .Jack was amazed at what he was looking (while he was still running away from khali)
Khali then feel into the hole created by the tree (beanstalk) and was now in 2009. Meanwhile as Jack was running he came across a castle which was still old looking and was cut off from the world. He went towards it as if something was pulling him .When he finally reached not before scarring and bruising himself allover he saw the world’s most beautiful girl and did not think twice before kissing her. That was the time when the sleeping beauty awoke and jack fell in love (his golden egg was the “sleeping beauty” herself).
Now there are 3 endings I have in mind, chose what u prefer.
Original end
Jack then went back to 2009, got his mother to 2049 and lived a luxurious life with Shruti forever. Although he does come once in a while just to thank me(over and over again ,after all he does owe me big time)or just to see me (mostly during diwali holidays ,how else would I know this story anyways? )
Another
Jack had married Shruti and now settled there. But one day as Jack was flipping through channels on TV he saw Swades and remembered his mother and his life in 2009 .So decided to go back to get his mother from 2009 but he wont be able to get his life. Will he be able go back to 2049 is to be seen...I am still trying to get him to stay. I’ll let you know what happens.
Another
Jack had married Shruti and now settled there. But one day as Jack was flipping through channels on TV he saw Swades and remembered his mother and his life in 2009 .So decided to go back to get his mother from 2009 but he wont be able to get his life.He ends up making Shruti stay with him here in 2009,yayy .But we don't know if their relationship will last in this generation of live in relationships, break ups,extra marital affairs and a lot more stuff that cant be spoken about here.
thanks for reaching til here,whoever does.
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